Early-summer reading and listening . . .

( Summer Reading so far . . .  )

An experiment of sorts

Thanks for the opinions on first-person and third-person points of view.

Let's try it this way.

I am going to post the first 1,170 words of "End of the Line" (working title).

I am trying to bang words out at this point, so some of the deisgnations and ideas are not thoroughly hammered out.

What follows is the third-person version.

I will rewrite a first-person version later and post it.

Any and all comments accepted.

I don't know if this is really "Copyright 2005, Clustermouse Publishing," but if you yoink my ideas, your underwear will always bunch up. GRIN!

( And away we go )

First person

This is a quick conversion to first-person. I know it's a little choppy.

( Once more . . .  )